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Post by theredshadow on May 25, 2012 21:41:57 GMT -6
Startled, he looked over at her, unsure if it was really happening. She was gazing forward but the slightest grin had crept across her lips. As they were walking, her fingers had made their way to his hand and were interlacing with his. He lightly squeezed his around hers and pulled her hand up to his chest, holding it there at his heart. She felt the rapid beating and her smile grew larger.
"Is that for me?" she asked, turning her head and finally looking him in the eyes.
He brought her hand up and kissed it with the lightest touch of his lips.
"It is, if this is for me."
She marveled at the intensity within his eyes as he said that, a stark contrast to the gentle way he was holding her hand. She simply continued to smile.
He inhaled deeply.
"Perhaps I can finally let go of the doubt and apprehension I've been clinging to for so long, but this," he said as he regarded their intertwining hands, "this is something I will never let go of."
They both smiled and walked on.
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Post by Wild Weasel on May 25, 2012 22:18:22 GMT -6
Sorry, Red, but this ain't enough to gross Mariolord out. It needs moar secks.
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Post by mariolord on May 25, 2012 22:20:24 GMT -6
Sorry, Red, but this ain't enough to gross Mariolord out. It needs moar secks. Don't give him any ideas!
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Post by theredshadow on May 25, 2012 22:22:52 GMT -6
I think it's time for a sexy time story.
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Post by mariolord on May 25, 2012 22:23:47 GMT -6
Curses! Foiled again!
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Post by mariolord on May 25, 2012 22:24:56 GMT -6
In all seriousness, though, I liked this piece. Although it's short, it expresses a lot, and it's very vivid.
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Post by theredshadow on May 26, 2012 23:31:20 GMT -6
Thanks. It is a good example of how my feelings at the time of writing something can have a profound influence on the end result.
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